Monday 26 March 2007

smiles



[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

14 comments:

John McDonald said...

like it
john

Anonymous said...

Very cool. Creative spin.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Excellent, very visual!

Anonymous said...

Reading between the lines. I like the visual.

Regina said...

Oh, how do you do that? Just a wonderful visual and a telling one-line haiku. I can feel the tenseness in it...

jo :: feather and thread said...

i almost forgot that it was only one line - you fooled me into thinking it was more than that...x

Unknown said...

This says so much in just five words!

Anonymous said...

Poignant!

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

I wanted to read more. . read each word, took in each background setting on entire page, wanted more.

jennifer black said...

Excellent. It's what's not said that gives the line power.

jb

Anonymous said...

Thanks for your comment. I like your stark poem and the crossing lines.

Rose

xo

Tammy Brierly said...

Loved this! So true :)

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Very interesting. So unusual for a haiku...I really like it.

Ä‘poetic1© said...

Well said... I like this one.