tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post1388986261605712292..comments2023-07-17T13:41:21.268+00:00Comments on -the sound of splinters-: needjemhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-85496897831327465342009-06-09T21:06:44.204+00:002009-06-09T21:06:44.204+00:00I find this very thoughtful and inspiring to a rem...I find this very thoughtful and inspiring to a remix maybe something like this:<br />-<br />Absorbent<br />left over water<br />her bare feetAshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257680577844653651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-64818949840058465442009-06-06T18:46:05.356+00:002009-06-06T18:46:05.356+00:00Nice. I suggest that
the water the plant
doesn...Nice. I suggest that<br /><br />the water the plant<br />doesn't need<br /><br />can be recycled as lines 2-3 of another haiku. Now all you have to do is come up with a first line.<br /><br />I like the sense, picked up by "dandelion," that the plant is making the decisions.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-37620322600689832802009-06-04T22:45:01.510+00:002009-06-04T22:45:01.510+00:00Wow, you're really on a roll! Love these, sorr...Wow, you're really on a roll! Love these, sorry to not have commented out loud in a while...Shelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08861427053408203618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-41924701996194397382009-06-04T07:31:04.612+00:002009-06-04T07:31:04.612+00:00I like your blog and your interesting way to prese...I like your blog and your interesting way to present verse and pictures.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-55891721131479796422009-06-03T06:44:20.035+00:002009-06-03T06:44:20.035+00:00I can hear that stream.....I can hear that stream.....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11878102599430407759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-84993842780753618282009-06-03T06:31:08.251+00:002009-06-03T06:31:08.251+00:00these are delightfully set out and fun to read.
t...these are delightfully set out and fun to read.<br /><br />thanks for dropping by and giving such thoughtful/useful comments. much appreciated Jem.Emma Dallowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762502184477362139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-14701429772455339702009-06-02T08:07:57.704+00:002009-06-02T08:07:57.704+00:00great set
johngreat set<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-29002291836201508752009-06-01T15:32:58.786+00:002009-06-01T15:32:58.786+00:00Does the plant decide it's had enough? Or the wat...Does the plant decide it's had enough? Or the waterer? Or the bare feet? great one jem...xjo :: feather and threadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04767443254492713038noreply@blogger.com