tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post390875040782505426..comments2023-07-17T13:41:21.268+00:00Comments on -the sound of splinters-: soiljemhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-11258639378195284922007-03-07T22:22:00.000+00:002007-03-07T22:22:00.000+00:00another beauty! x.another beauty! x.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-6791752502383382532007-03-07T22:19:00.000+00:002007-03-07T22:19:00.000+00:00Great haiku! I like the one in the middle the bes...Great haiku! I like the one in the middle the best :o)wrchilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01117935090937352862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-13952268613653448572007-03-07T21:40:00.000+00:002007-03-07T21:40:00.000+00:00Wow! The first is my favorite--such a strong recal...Wow! The first is my favorite--such a strong recall of the senses. I remember as a child the astonishing sensation of a grain of sand between my teeth. Unforgettable.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16947043309319496271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-38264966884341766942007-03-07T21:03:00.000+00:002007-03-07T21:03:00.000+00:00Great presentation. The first one reminded me that...Great presentation. The first one reminded me that as kids, we used to lick the salt block my Dad put out for the cows. Surely, dirt was cleaner than that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-22282994352611293342007-03-07T20:24:00.000+00:002007-03-07T20:24:00.000+00:00Jem,These all move from thought to word very well....Jem,<BR/>These all move from thought to word very well.<BR/>Neat presentation with the photo, very original.<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-31765095836223672542007-03-07T04:30:00.000+00:002007-03-07T04:30:00.000+00:00unforgivenmy footprintson their carpetReally nice ...unforgiven<BR/>my footprints<BR/>on their carpet<BR/><BR/>Really nice ku.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-46015409715039546592007-03-07T02:40:00.000+00:002007-03-07T02:40:00.000+00:00These have a very deep thoughtfulness about them~v...These have a very deep thoughtfulness about them~very nicely done. I like the way you've illustrated them too.Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-9676640090964839802007-03-07T01:49:00.000+00:002007-03-07T01:49:00.000+00:00I love the look of these but I really loved what t...I love the look of these but I really loved what they conveyed. Well done!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-80893547503364407952007-03-07T01:26:00.000+00:002007-03-07T01:26:00.000+00:00These are all wonderful. I like that dirt takes yo...These are all wonderful. I like that dirt takes you back to childhood, as it does for me as well.Jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10128966776368179139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-51020190781811584752007-03-07T00:32:00.000+00:002007-03-07T00:32:00.000+00:00I like the middle one. The image of feet tracking ...I like the middle one. The image of feet tracking in the outdoors. Very moving words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-79103013100386380072007-03-07T00:27:00.000+00:002007-03-07T00:27:00.000+00:00Very powerful haiku... so expressive... made me pa...Very powerful haiku... so expressive... made me pause and really think... thank you.Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1704877104906888774.post-42656016160697645752007-03-06T15:17:00.000+00:002007-03-06T15:17:00.000+00:00Excellent haiku! I like the way you've laid them o...Excellent haiku! I like the way you've laid them out too.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.com