simple words with so much deeper meaning...kind of like the sea...mostly water but so much lies beneath the surface :-)
a pier on the British coast? these certainly took me back to some bacon sandwich moments (and those cracks in rickety pier boards)!
these take me to Blackpool, definitely!
these make me want to go to the coast...
The first one is really nice! Leaves so much room to experience it....
Oh, these are purely lovely. The immensity of the sea...
these look like they are written on fish and chip paper - how apt! are the lips salty from the bacon or from the sea - who can tell! love them...x
I especially like the first one, although I prefer a wee bit of brown sauce to salt these days.
I always love how you present your haiku!
another couple of excellent pieces.
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