Tuesday, 3 July 2007

shadow

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[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

12 comments:

Mandy said...

a remarkable quartet of fragments

I've read them a few times over and will go back

polona said...

powerful set, all of them.

John McDonald said...

loved these
john

Crafty Green Poet said...

these are excellent - especially those on the right. They're definitely worth several re-readings.

Plain Foolish said...

Very strong use of the theme. I particularly liked "making choices".

Clare said...

Hi Jem -- these are incredible and I love how you presented them. I especially love the lines "spent shadows/ fall from leaves" -- this was so beautiful and is a really cool way of going beyond the usual leaves falling. All of these haiku are breathtaking.

Quietpaths said...

As usual, a lovely presentation of some beautiful images. I do like the first very much...

Ackworth Born said...

I love them too -- nothing more to add.

get zapped said...

I really like these and especially "the silhouette of what you could have been. Wow!

spacedlaw said...

Those two lower ones are just marvelous.

dandelion said...

an amazing set of words - I particulary like the idea of 'spent shadows' and I'm wondering/worrying about my silhouette of what I could've been...x

Pearl said...

Ooh, like the pen one.