Monday, 5 November 2007

loneliness


[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

15 comments:

Greggo said...

lol! i love this! especially since i felt the need to look it up myself before i posted my haiku. ;-)

tumblewords said...

Ah. This one bears another layer - I felt my throat bind as I read...Nice, oh, nice!

Eric said...

beautiful!

Hundred and one said...

Love it!

coconutannies said...

OH WOW! I SEE her - her graying hair pulled back in a bun, her sweater over her shoulders and her sensible shoes!

Roswila said...

Wonderful! So evocative.

John McDonald said...

excellent couple
john

Crafty Green Poet said...

there's a whole story in there, beautifully sad

polona said...

quite a story in these few words...
excellent.

Cloudscome said...

oh boy can I ever relate to this!!

AnnieElf said...

I really, REALLY like this.

LittleWing said...

what a great take on this week's prompt...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love this!! I must have missed it.

Ackworth Born said...

o yes I love this

get zapped said...

Wow, this is perfect. Simple and precious. Thank you.