Monday, 21 January 2008

opticians


[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

15 comments:

paisley said...

very nice... i can actually remember doing just that.....

Crafty Green Poet said...

I can remember doing that too...

susan said...

My first time to your blog and very pleased. Enjoyed your take.

Plain Foolish said...

Brought a smile to my face.

Roswila said...

Delightful!

spacedlaw said...

How familiar!
I can still fell myself squinting...

I don't leave comments often but I must tell you of what sheer delight your blog is to me.

polona said...

i don't remember doing that... but then again, i never needed to visit an optician...

tumblewords said...

Clever and very visual!

Rae Trigg said...

Your haiku made me chuckle at the thought of a child trying to make sense of a vision test.

Sian said...

this made me smile

Sandy Carlson said...

I like this. A child's expectations--the natural anticipation of order?--versus the reality. What happens when we don't understand the goals of others. Very well done.
Writing in Faith

John McDonald said...

loved all three
john

qualcosa di bello said...

very nice! a lighthearted take...

LittleWing said...

ohhh, that was so very very good!!!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

sounds like me a week ago! :)