Wonderful word play here. And people do not generally associate Autumn with falling in love - rather falling out of it.A "deeper shade of autumn" somehow reminds me of a "whiter shade of pale" from the old song. I like your reworking ...
I like this very much. Growing older and in love, I can appreciate this!
Falling in love does deepen everything about a person! It adds dimension, vibrance and depth! Well done!
There's lots of layers of meaning and interpretations to think about here, in so few words - now that's poetry!!!
love the play on dyeing and dying, interesting that September and October are nearly as popular as late spring, early summer for weddings.
Nice.
An original perspective here. I liked it.
What an intriguing and unique take on the prompt. Loved it!www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
Awesome play on words. In just a few lines you have said volumes.....love-bd
I love this. It's so clever and evokes so much with so few words.
What a wonderful response to the prompt. I can just see her fiery autumnal hair.
beautiful reds here. :)
ohhh... i love this. and interesting juxtaposition but it works wonderfully...
A deeper shade of autumn-I love that! And, my sister must have done the whole season by now, so your haiku made me laugh.
Perfect -
I love this!!
How delightful! What a great play on the prompt. You leave me chuckling.
I love your take on the prompt of autumn-so creative.
love them all - as usual!john
this really speaks to me, as my husband & i met & fell in love in autumn.
beautiful!!
like I said last time :)
Beautiful!
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Wonderful word play here. And people do not generally associate Autumn with falling in love - rather falling out of it.
A "deeper shade of autumn" somehow reminds me of a "whiter shade of pale" from the old song. I like your reworking ...
I like this very much. Growing older and in love, I can appreciate this!
Falling in love does deepen everything about a person! It adds dimension, vibrance and depth! Well done!
There's lots of layers of meaning and interpretations to think about here, in so few words - now that's poetry!!!
love the play on dyeing and dying, interesting that September and October are nearly as popular as late spring, early summer for weddings.
Nice.
An original perspective here. I liked it.
What an intriguing and unique take on the prompt. Loved it!
www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
Awesome play on words. In just a few lines you have said volumes.....
love-bd
I love this. It's so clever and evokes so much with so few words.
What a wonderful response to the prompt. I can just see her fiery autumnal hair.
beautiful reds here. :)
ohhh... i love this. and interesting juxtaposition but it works wonderfully...
A deeper shade of autumn-I love that! And, my sister must have done the whole season by now, so your haiku made me laugh.
Perfect -
I love this!!
How delightful! What a great play on the prompt. You leave me chuckling.
I love your take on the prompt of autumn-so creative.
love them all - as usual!
john
this really speaks to me, as my husband & i met & fell in love in autumn.
beautiful!!
like I said last time :)
Beautiful!
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