Sunday, 21 September 2008

dyes


[inspired by the latest prompt at one single impression]


23 comments:

Julie said...

Wonderful word play here. And people do not generally associate Autumn with falling in love - rather falling out of it.

A "deeper shade of autumn" somehow reminds me of a "whiter shade of pale" from the old song. I like your reworking ...

SandyCarlson said...

I like this very much. Growing older and in love, I can appreciate this!

barbs.haiku said...

Falling in love does deepen everything about a person! It adds dimension, vibrance and depth! Well done!

Deborah Godin said...

There's lots of layers of meaning and interpretations to think about here, in so few words - now that's poetry!!!

Sue said...

love the play on dyeing and dying, interesting that September and October are nearly as popular as late spring, early summer for weddings.

Masago said...

Nice.

anthonynorth said...

An original perspective here. I liked it.

Geraldine said...

What an intriguing and unique take on the prompt. Loved it!

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Beloved Dreamer said...

Awesome play on words. In just a few lines you have said volumes.....

love-bd

Raven said...

I love this. It's so clever and evokes so much with so few words.

Pam said...

What a wonderful response to the prompt. I can just see her fiery autumnal hair.

kouji said...

beautiful reds here. :)

polona said...

ohhh... i love this. and interesting juxtaposition but it works wonderfully...

fourwindshaiga said...

A deeper shade of autumn-I love that! And, my sister must have done the whole season by now, so your haiku made me laugh.

tumblewords said...

Perfect -

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love this!!

Patois said...

How delightful! What a great play on the prompt. You leave me chuckling.

Teri C said...

I love your take on the prompt of autumn-so creative.

John McDonald said...

love them all - as usual!
john

qualcosa di bello said...

this really speaks to me, as my husband & i met & fell in love in autumn.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

beautiful!!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

like I said last time :)

spacedlaw said...

Beautiful!