Wednesday 14 January 2009

wrong


[inspired by the latest prompt at one single impression]

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

..sometimes the gaps & spaces are as eloquent as the words-as is in your well phrased poem here..many thanks..

SandyCarlson said...

I know this feeling. So very out of place! Well done. Thanks for sharing that with OSI.

Anonymous said...

I am laughing, but I do feel your distress. Priceless!

Anonymous said...

so few words that say so much. Great stuff. Thank you

Bill said...

midnight Mass
our parish church
full of strangers

John McDonald said...

great trio
john

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, this is great!

Unknown said...

Love this. Now I want to know what happened next!

polona said...

an embarrassing moment, no doubt, but perfectly represented.

Amanda said...

i really love this & your blog, thank you.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

ha! I do wish it was summer, though. :)

Kilauea Poetry said...

This is clever..