Friday, 13 February 2009

sweeps


[inspired by the latest prompt at one single impression]

postscript - oops, I need a proof-reader, how did that rogue apostrophe get in there! apologies to the grammatically correct among my readers, I must try harder

13 comments:

Annie said...

I like that the tree is doing the sweeping.

kitehorse said...

I like the title and the sandburgian greengrocer's apostrophe

fourwindshaiga said...

I like the idea for the poem, the finished poem, and the torn paper.

SandyCarlson said...

That is sweet and delightful!

Amias said...

I love the presentation.

John McDonald said...

used to be a common fault of mine jem -loved these three
john

Masago said...

yes

polona said...

this is delightful...
(perhaps the fir will sweep away the apostrophe as well)

Gillena Cox said...

rainy morning
grey clouds weep
over the trees

much love
gillena

Devika said...

First time here Jem,

nice one,
when far away trees sway in the wind, it leaves that impression :)


wishes,
devika

Bill said...

Forgiven, jem. At a workshop I frequent, we've evolved the abbreviation DET for "danged English teachers." I'm one of them, by the way.

mattm said...

What the rest of them said... and rogue apostrophe's' are my speciality...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

don't feel bad- I do stuff like that all day every day! :)
(I had to spell check THIS even)