I like that the tree is doing the sweeping.
I like the title and the sandburgian greengrocer's apostrophe
I like the idea for the poem, the finished poem, and the torn paper.
That is sweet and delightful!
I love the presentation.
used to be a common fault of mine jem -loved these threejohn
this is delightful...(perhaps the fir will sweep away the apostrophe as well)
rainy morninggrey clouds weepover the treesmuch lovegillena
First time here Jem, nice one, when far away trees sway in the wind, it leaves that impression :) wishes, devika
Forgiven, jem. At a workshop I frequent, we've evolved the abbreviation DET for "danged English teachers." I'm one of them, by the way.
What the rest of them said... and rogue apostrophe's' are my speciality...
don't feel bad- I do stuff like that all day every day! :)(I had to spell check THIS even)
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