Saturday, 11 July 2009

ignored

5 comments:

Devika said...

there's a lesson that i see in this...out of love we do many things,

but killing daisies before time...i see plucking flowers for a love as killing nature,

but then, certain flowers like jasmine, roses..the plants blooms more if the buds are plucked...do not know about daisies,

good haiku,
to love and to be loved is a good feeling...but as a writer and reader of poems, i think unrequitted love makes a better poet....atleast, i am more comfortable there :)

wishes,
devika

Annie said...

Such a beautiful moment.....

Pearl said...

so much more than the word crestfallen could convey yet not overstating.

Pen Paper (Pause) said...

i like this one a lot

Brian Pike said...

Crumpled paper - so right!