Thursday, 1 September 2011

yacht


4 comments:

Bill said...

I like this. I was wondering if

singles yacht trip
so long since
my course was marked

might work.

jem said...

It's far better without those 4 unnecessary words. Thanks for your advice Bill - always warmly welcomed!

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...
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Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

invite you to share a Haiku or a poem of your choice to poets rally week 51 today.

a free verse or a haiku is welcome.

keep up the excellence!
xoxox