Not sure you need "all," but a good moment.
I've just begun to write Haiku recently so I'm searching out blog sites where I can respond writing my own to the same prompt.So here is my endeavor for ACHEAcheTime is Tooth-HurtyTo the dentist I must goTo drill pain away
I quite like the use of 'all' - I think it emphasises the amount of teeth rather than just 'teeth'
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Not sure you need "all," but a good moment.
I've just begun to write Haiku recently so I'm searching out blog sites where I can respond writing my own to the same prompt.
So here is my endeavor for ACHE
Ache
Time is Tooth-Hurty
To the dentist I must go
To drill pain away
I quite like the use of 'all' - I think it emphasises the amount of teeth rather than just 'teeth'
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