Very nice jux.
I like how this can be read as the rain being so persistent and distracting that it makes you forget the words, or purely as just a juxtaposition of the two elements; and there's also that rich but subtle comparison between the sound of the rain and the notes and words of the songs. Lovely stuff.
Bill and Paul - thank you both so much for your time spent reading and thoughtful comments. I appreciate them so much and love knowing what resonates with each of you.
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