excellenta good take on the theme
sad but curious...x
Nice. Thoughtful. I love that you did your own art!
I love that one, clever and moving.
Great haiku, the thought of the air in a balloon as breath.
Fantastic! Said so simply. I am just breaking up with my boyfriend and I get so filled with blue I have to release and let it all out. Thank you for this wonderful haiku.
Yes! Wonderful! Sad and such a good ku. Though, as I thought on it, it could also be a happy reminder that that person is still in one's life.... :-)
Wonderful job!
This was lovely!
Sad thing to happen, but wonderful poem.
cool...we do leave some of ourselves behind when we go. the visual and words are both well done. thank you.
terrificjohn
This is lighthearted but still very meaningful. Very nicely done!
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excellent
a good take on the theme
sad but curious...x
Nice. Thoughtful. I love that you did your own art!
I love that one, clever and moving.
Great haiku, the thought of the air in a balloon as breath.
Fantastic! Said so simply. I am just breaking up with my boyfriend and I get so filled with blue I have to release and let it all out. Thank you for this wonderful haiku.
Yes! Wonderful! Sad and such a good ku. Though, as I thought on it, it could also be a happy reminder that that person is still in one's life.... :-)
Wonderful job!
This was lovely!
Sad thing to happen, but wonderful poem.
cool...we do leave some of ourselves behind when we go. the visual and words are both well done. thank you.
terrific
john
This is lighthearted but still very meaningful. Very nicely done!
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