-the sound of splinters-: smiles

Monday, 26 March 2007

[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

John McDonald said...: like it
john; 27 March 2007 at 08:01
Anonymous said...: Very cool. Creative spin.; 27 March 2007 at 14:38
Crafty Green Poet said...: Excellent, very visual!; 27 March 2007 at 14:48
Anonymous said...: Reading between the lines. I like the visual.; 27 March 2007 at 14:51
Regina said...: Oh, how do you do that? Just a wonderful visual and a telling one-line haiku. I can feel the tenseness in it...; 27 March 2007 at 15:03
jo :: feather and thread said...: i almost forgot that it was only one line - you fooled me into thinking it was more than that...x; 27 March 2007 at 17:35
Unknown said...: This says so much in just five words!; 27 March 2007 at 18:54
Anonymous said...: Poignant!; 27 March 2007 at 20:33
Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...: I wanted to read more. . read each word, took in each background setting on entire page, wanted more.; 27 March 2007 at 22:51
jennifer black said...: Excellent. It's what's not said that gives the line power.

jb; 28 March 2007 at 12:47
Anonymous said...: Thanks for your comment. I like your stark poem and the crossing lines.

Rose

xo; 28 March 2007 at 18:39
Tammy Brierly said...: Loved this! So true :); 28 March 2007 at 19:54
Nancy Bea Miller said...: Very interesting. So unusual for a haiku...I really like it.; 29 March 2007 at 03:01