it's probably just me but i prefer nature's way of creative chaos...but these are both good haiku.
enjoyed very muchjohn
round here alasthey are flattening stonesas an exercise in neatness
Well-observed. The notepad is interesting too.
i had never thought of things being taller when the ground is mown, but that really makes sense somehow...x
really nice one.
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it's probably just me but i prefer nature's way of creative chaos...
but these are both good haiku.
enjoyed very much
john
round here alas
they are flattening stones
as an exercise in neatness
Well-observed. The notepad is interesting too.
i had never thought of things being taller when the ground is mown, but that really makes sense somehow...x
really nice one.
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