So know that experience! I feel that one. Thanks for joining in.
Powerfully put with just a few words...I could hear the silence of those empty rooms.
"newly single" -- thats interesting -- Jem :)yes, i've known it too....though not a single, wishes, devika
A very evocative haiku.
Enjoyed your haiku and your site. just starting to take haiku to different visual levels myself. Thanks for the inspiration.
Loneliness can be very loud at times. Within that loneliness can also be a strength to draw upon.
I enjoyed your haiku poem. You certainly express the feelings of being single.
yaa.. it landed very neatly.. good combination for both prompts! :)
Very powerful haiku, and I did not miss the presence of the wall in your haiku.
Good catch.
pared down in a lovely way to its essence.
Wonderful haiku!
amazing how in just a few words you can capture such a powerful feeling so completely....thought it was great...........
wow. been away from blogging and reading blogs for awhile. some amazing stuff here. very beautiful work!
This seems to be a haiku/twit kind of thing. As one's attention span decreases things just disappear.No it is not a pear it is an apple.Life is good,d
A friend once told me:"If you're sad, don't beIf you're tired, lean on me."It's a horrible feeling, isn't it? And yet I get the sense, past all the power you loaded those words with, that you felt like you're something new now, and something better.Keep feeling that way. You go, girl!~ Keandahttp://thecarbonatom.blogspot.com
you said it all...
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So know that experience! I feel that one. Thanks for joining in.
Powerfully put with just a few words...I could hear the silence of those empty rooms.
"newly single" -- thats interesting -- Jem :)
yes, i've known it too....though not a single,
wishes,
devika
A very evocative haiku.
Enjoyed your haiku and your site. just starting to take haiku to different visual levels myself. Thanks for the inspiration.
Loneliness can be very loud at times. Within that loneliness can also be a strength to draw upon.
I enjoyed your haiku poem. You certainly express the feelings of being single.
yaa.. it landed very neatly.. good combination for both prompts! :)
Very powerful haiku, and I did not miss the presence of the wall in your haiku.
Good catch.
pared down in a lovely way to its essence.
Wonderful haiku!
amazing how in just a few words you can capture such a powerful feeling so completely....thought it was great...........
wow. been away from blogging and reading blogs for awhile. some amazing stuff here. very beautiful work!
This seems to be a haiku/twit kind of thing. As one's attention span decreases things just disappear.
No it is not a pear it is an apple.
Life is good,
d
A friend once told me:
"If you're sad, don't be
If you're tired, lean on me."
It's a horrible feeling, isn't it?
And yet I get the sense, past all the power you loaded those words with, that you felt like you're something new now, and something better.
Keep feeling that way. You go, girl!
~ Keanda
http://thecarbonatom.blogspot.com
you said it all...
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