Y'know, I think you might try this without the first word of line 2. Nice.
Very good point as always Bill!
Beautiful image - the thought of a 'slow unravel' is so evocative.
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Y'know, I think you might try this without the first word of line 2. Nice.
Very good point as always Bill!
Beautiful image - the thought of a 'slow unravel' is so evocative.
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