it's probably just me but i prefer nature's way of creative chaos...but these are both good haiku.
good one!
enjoyed very muchjohn
round here alasthey are flattening stonesas an exercise in neatness
Well-observed. The notepad is interesting too.
i had never thought of things being taller when the ground is mown, but that really makes sense somehow...x
really nice one.
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it's probably just me but i prefer nature's way of creative chaos...
but these are both good haiku.
good one!
enjoyed very much
john
round here alas
they are flattening stones
as an exercise in neatness
Well-observed. The notepad is interesting too.
i had never thought of things being taller when the ground is mown, but that really makes sense somehow...x
really nice one.
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