Does the plant decide it's had enough? Or the waterer? Or the bare feet? great one jem...x
great setjohn
these are delightfully set out and fun to read.thanks for dropping by and giving such thoughtful/useful comments. much appreciated Jem.
I can hear that stream.....
I like your blog and your interesting way to present verse and pictures.Best wishesRalf
Wow, you're really on a roll! Love these, sorry to not have commented out loud in a while...
Nice. I suggest thatthe water the plantdoesn't needcan be recycled as lines 2-3 of another haiku. Now all you have to do is come up with a first line.I like the sense, picked up by "dandelion," that the plant is making the decisions.
I find this very thoughtful and inspiring to a remix maybe something like this:-Absorbentleft over waterher bare feet
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Does the plant decide it's had enough? Or the waterer? Or the bare feet? great one jem...x
great set
john
these are delightfully set out and fun to read.
thanks for dropping by and giving such thoughtful/useful comments. much appreciated Jem.
I can hear that stream.....
I like your blog and your interesting way to present verse and pictures.
Best wishes
Ralf
Wow, you're really on a roll! Love these, sorry to not have commented out loud in a while...
Nice. I suggest that
the water the plant
doesn't need
can be recycled as lines 2-3 of another haiku. Now all you have to do is come up with a first line.
I like the sense, picked up by "dandelion," that the plant is making the decisions.
I find this very thoughtful and inspiring to a remix maybe something like this:
-
Absorbent
left over water
her bare feet
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