Monday, 1 June 2009

need

8 comments:

dandelion said...

Does the plant decide it's had enough? Or the waterer? Or the bare feet? great one jem...x

John McDonald said...

great set
john

Dalloway said...

these are delightfully set out and fun to read.

thanks for dropping by and giving such thoughtful/useful comments. much appreciated Jem.

Annie said...

I can hear that stream.....

RBroeker said...

I like your blog and your interesting way to present verse and pictures.

Best wishes
Ralf

Shelley said...

Wow, you're really on a roll! Love these, sorry to not have commented out loud in a while...

Bill said...

Nice. I suggest that

the water the plant
doesn't need

can be recycled as lines 2-3 of another haiku. Now all you have to do is come up with a first line.

I like the sense, picked up by "dandelion," that the plant is making the decisions.

Ashi said...

I find this very thoughtful and inspiring to a remix maybe something like this:
-
Absorbent
left over water
her bare feet