Friday, 1 March 2013

blade


4 comments:

Bill said...

"each blade silvered" gets the sense of extreme clarity.

Gillena Cox said...

like the spontaneity of the paper's edge adds an edginess to the haiga

much love...

Frank... said...

Nice one, Jem.

dandelion said...

I think I have said this before (and there is probably a word for it - freudian slip of the written word??) but sometimes the words you use can be so easily misread to give another word that would also give meaning. I read this several times as 'slivered' until I realised it was 'silvered'. I'm happier with silvered so I'm glad I kept re-reading. :)