Those slips have a lovely haiku feel to them.
i've been listening to the railways whirring before the arrival of train...and this one also reminds me of one of my haiku:noon heatacross a narrow streetthe smell of grilled fish
had some for lunchcan still smell themlingering
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Those slips have a lovely haiku feel to them.
i've been listening to the railways whirring before the arrival of train...
and this one also reminds me of one of my haiku:
noon heat
across a narrow street
the smell of grilled fish
had some for lunch
can still smell them
lingering
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