Hi Jem -- these are incredible and I love how you presented them. I especially love the lines "spent shadows/ fall from leaves" -- this was so beautiful and is a really cool way of going beyond the usual leaves falling. All of these haiku are breathtaking.
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a remarkable quartet of fragments
I've read them a few times over and will go back
powerful set, all of them.
loved these
john
these are excellent - especially those on the right. They're definitely worth several re-readings.
Very strong use of the theme. I particularly liked "making choices".
Hi Jem -- these are incredible and I love how you presented them. I especially love the lines "spent shadows/ fall from leaves" -- this was so beautiful and is a really cool way of going beyond the usual leaves falling. All of these haiku are breathtaking.
As usual, a lovely presentation of some beautiful images. I do like the first very much...
I love them too -- nothing more to add.
I really like these and especially "the silhouette of what you could have been. Wow!
Those two lower ones are just marvelous.
an amazing set of words - I particulary like the idea of 'spent shadows' and I'm wondering/worrying about my silhouette of what I could've been...x
Ooh, like the pen one.
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