Tuesday, 20 March 2007

balloon


[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

13 comments:

Mandy said...

excellent

a good take on the theme

dandelion said...

sad but curious...x

Liza Lee Miller said...

Nice. Thoughtful. I love that you did your own art!

Crafty Green Poet said...

I love that one, clever and moving.

Brian said...

Great haiku, the thought of the air in a balloon as breath.

getzapped said...

Fantastic! Said so simply. I am just breaking up with my boyfriend and I get so filled with blue I have to release and let it all out. Thank you for this wonderful haiku.

Roswila said...

Yes! Wonderful! Sad and such a good ku. Though, as I thought on it, it could also be a happy reminder that that person is still in one's life.... :-)

Tammy said...

Wonderful job!

Regina Clare Jane said...

This was lovely!

Sandy said...

Sad thing to happen, but wonderful poem.

megan said...

cool...we do leave some of ourselves behind when we go. the visual and words are both well done. thank you.

John McDonald said...

terrific
john

Star said...

This is lighthearted but still very meaningful. Very nicely done!