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This one made me smile....
what are you doing in my room, lol. Time to clean up my dirty dishes. I loved it!
I sense sadness. Great haiku.
There's more to this haiku than meets the eye...
Intriguing! So many different scenarios occur to me. Not the least of which is just the same thing happening to me, only the glass would be by my easy chair, forgotten as I ponder .... my thirst being slaked elsewhere ....
This is so very good...the image of the dusty glass of water so strongly evokes stillness, even stagnation.Wonderful!
so nicely open-ended
Wow! So many different images come to mind! Very interesting.
Wonderful haiku! I love your site.
jem, i'm coming at this late, but this is top drawer stuff - well done!
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