-the sound of splinters-: dust

Monday 12 March 2007

[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

Mandy said...: lovely

i'm adding you to my bloglinks; 12 March 2007 at 22:53
Crafty Green Poet said...: This one made me smile....; 13 March 2007 at 14:29
Bianca said...: what are you doing in my room, lol. Time to clean up my dirty dishes. I loved it!; 13 March 2007 at 14:41
Anonymous said...: I sense sadness. Great haiku.; 13 March 2007 at 14:46
Elspeth said...: Potent.; 13 March 2007 at 15:22
Regina said...: There's more to this haiku than meets the eye...; 13 March 2007 at 16:10
Roswila said...: Intriguing! So many different scenarios occur to me. Not the least of which is just the same thing happening to me, only the glass would be by my easy chair, forgotten as I ponder .... my thirst being slaked elsewhere ....; 13 March 2007 at 17:45
Becca said...: This is so very good...the image of the dusty glass of water so strongly evokes stillness, even stagnation.

Wonderful!; 14 March 2007 at 03:15
Jone said...: Haunting; 14 March 2007 at 03:46
Gerald (Ackworth born) said...: so nicely open-ended; 14 March 2007 at 13:14
Anonymous said...: Wow! So many different images come to mind! Very interesting.; 15 March 2007 at 14:39
wrchili said...: Wonderful haiku! I love your site.; 15 March 2007 at 15:22
mattm said...: jem, i'm coming at this late, but this is top drawer stuff - well done!; 1 May 2007 at 21:16