Monday, 12 March 2007

dust


[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

13 comments:

Mandy said...

lovely

i'm adding you to my bloglinks

Crafty Green Poet said...

This one made me smile....

1blkquill said...

what are you doing in my room, lol. Time to clean up my dirty dishes. I loved it!

Brian said...

I sense sadness. Great haiku.

Elspeth said...

Potent.

Regina Clare Jane said...

There's more to this haiku than meets the eye...

Roswila said...

Intriguing! So many different scenarios occur to me. Not the least of which is just the same thing happening to me, only the glass would be by my easy chair, forgotten as I ponder .... my thirst being slaked elsewhere ....

Becca said...

This is so very good...the image of the dusty glass of water so strongly evokes stillness, even stagnation.

Wonderful!

Jone said...

Haunting

Ackworth Born said...

so nicely open-ended

Robin said...

Wow! So many different images come to mind! Very interesting.

whitney said...

Wonderful haiku! I love your site.

mattm said...

jem, i'm coming at this late, but this is top drawer stuff - well done!