Monday, 26 March 2007

smiles



[inspired by the latest prompt at one deep breath]

16 comments:

John McDonald said...

like it
john

Pearl said...

Very cool. Creative spin.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Excellent, very visual!

Brian said...

Reading between the lines. I like the visual.

Regina Clare Jane said...

Oh, how do you do that? Just a wonderful visual and a telling one-line haiku. I can feel the tenseness in it...

dandelion said...

i almost forgot that it was only one line - you fooled me into thinking it was more than that...x

Colorful Prose said...

This says so much in just five words!

Gerald England said...

excellent

get zapped said...

Poignant!

Marcia said...

I wanted to read more. . read each word, took in each background setting on entire page, wanted more.

jblack designs said...

Excellent. It's what's not said that gives the line power.

jb

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

Thanks for your comment. I like your stark poem and the crossing lines.

Rose

xo

Tammy said...

Loved this! So true :)

Nancy Bea said...

Very interesting. So unusual for a haiku...I really like it.

Jone said...

Well done.

Ä‘poetic1© said...

Well said... I like this one.