Very cool. Creative spin.
Excellent, very visual!
Reading between the lines. I like the visual.
Oh, how do you do that? Just a wonderful visual and a telling one-line haiku. I can feel the tenseness in it...
i almost forgot that it was only one line - you fooled me into thinking it was more than that...x
This says so much in just five words!
I wanted to read more. . read each word, took in each background setting on entire page, wanted more.
Excellent. It's what's not said that gives the line power.jb
Thanks for your comment. I like your stark poem and the crossing lines.Rosexo
Loved this! So true :)
Very interesting. So unusual for a haiku...I really like it.
Well said... I like this one.
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