Perfect perfect!
'the heartbeat of the sleepless' wow...x
I sometimes get insomnia, so I understand this one very well.
You nailed it. Perfect.
I tip my hat to you. Excellent
Know this feeling.
Sure can feel this one! Perfect image.
ndlyLove the way the drip gets to be the rigid measurer of time.
Sorry - got a bit of the security code in the wrong place, there! ndly isn't meant to confuse you.
It's kind of like water torture-- trying to sleep but something always annoying you enough that sleep just won't come. Nice.
This is perfect,nicely written.
I can so relate. What a great take on the prompt and loved your presentation too. How original!www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
dripping tapin the dark I listento my heartbeat
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Perfect perfect!
'the heartbeat of the sleepless' wow...x
I sometimes get insomnia, so I understand this one very well.
You nailed it. Perfect.
I tip my hat to you. Excellent
Know this feeling.
Sure can feel this one! Perfect image.
ndlyLove the way the drip gets to be the rigid measurer of time.
Sorry - got a bit of the security code in the wrong place, there! ndly isn't meant to confuse you.
It's kind of like water torture-- trying to sleep but something always annoying you enough that sleep just won't come. Nice.
This is perfect,nicely written.
I can so relate. What a great take on the prompt and loved your presentation too. How original!
www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
dripping tap
in the dark I listen
to my heartbeat
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