Sunday, 12 October 2008

gold



[inspired by the latest prompt at one single impression]


14 comments:

anthonynorth said...

I feel a sense of loss to this. Nicely done.

Deborah Godin said...

Lovely little poem, and really proves the old saying "A word is worth a thousand pictures" Okay, it's not an old saying but it should be - there's a lot of mental images in this!

qualcosa di bello said...

very deep thoughts running through a few words...like anthony i sense loss in them

SandyCarlson said...

The tangle makes me wonder what caused her to stop wearing those chains! This is a wonderful, evocative piece. Thanks.

teric said...

This photo is so creatively done and the haiku leaves me wondering why. Very effective.

Masago said...

Well done.

fourwindshaiga said...

Think of it as a treasure chest! A nice poem.

Greyscale Territory said...

There is a real deep pain in this tangle of gold! Beautifully expressed!

tumblewords said...

Thought provoking and yet full of simplicity and warmth. Nice post! I always enjoy your work!

spacedlaw said...

I like how this raises all sorts of questions.

Patois said...

I love the poem and its presentation.

polona said...

there is a sense of loss here, but also freedom... but that's what life is all about...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice!

Beth P. said...

aw...that feeling of being bereft of something that once was 'here'.

thank you!