This just makes me smile - having seen seagulls trip over their own feet so many times.
ha, great observation :)
oh, i don't want to laugh, but... loving your bird-tastic run of splinters lately...x
This is good, jem, but I think you have two good ones heretop of the walla seagull stumblesandtop of the walla seagull drops a feather
Thanks as ever for everyone's comments. And special thanks to Bill for taking the time to make really useful suggestions. Critical comment is always welcome and I agree with the points you've made. I think all haiku poets should have a tattoo reading 'less is more'!!!
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This just makes me smile - having seen seagulls trip over their own feet so many times.
ha, great observation :)
oh, i don't want to laugh, but... loving your bird-tastic run of splinters lately...x
This is good, jem, but I think you have two good ones here
top of the wall
a seagull
stumbles
and
top of the wall
a seagull
drops a feather
Thanks as ever for everyone's comments.
And special thanks to Bill for taking the time to make really useful suggestions. Critical comment is always welcome and I agree with the points you've made. I think all haiku poets should have a tattoo reading 'less is more'!!!
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